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The over all anatomy is very well done nothing really seems out of proportion and it rather does look good. The colors seem decent and match, but there are a few places like the hair that should have been colored a little darker and then some more values to make the arm stand out from the hair so that it looks a lot more 3 dimensional. I think for taking a photograph and not scanning on the image you did a good job. I do have to say that the stars are a good detail but I think would have looked better if you had done them yourself.

Over all good job! Just work a little more on values with the water color pencils.
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:iconalera-chan:
Thank you for that critique! ^^ I know about the hair,but this was the first time for me using these pencils for something serious and I didn't know how to make them work right.XD I kept putting more and more colour and nothing changed! I should have put more colour after it got dry.but then I was afraid not to ruin everything. XD ^^; Now I know what to do so I'll do better next time. ;p I promise! ^^
And the stars are real ones.I took them from my magical box with stuff. *w* I love that box,because it's full of little shiny things I've collected and I can put them on my clothes,post cards,drawings,everything! ^^

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